WALT describe using the 5 senses
- look
- hear
- taste
- smell
- feel or touch
My scene:The homeless dog
The hot hot sun was beating down on my fur. A gust of wind came and breezed over me. It felt like all the hot hot sun had vanished.Loud noises of pots banging could be heard. I could see someone cooking and smelt something delicious coming from the kitchen. My tummy started to rumble. My tail wagged and wagged and wagged.The chef gave me some pie, it was mouth watering.
love the detail and pour dog and that chef was really nice and it does have so much senses in it love it
ReplyDeleteyou put a lot of detail into it and all of the five senses were in it. Good job.
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