Friday, April 24, 2015

Candy Land

This week in my writing I was learning about 
  • Strong adjectives 
  • Different sentence starters
  • Making sense 
  • A simile 

Candy land
I turn around and in front of my eyes is the most amazing scene. I can see colorful lollipops that looks like growing flowers with swirls and the grass is lime frost. A rainbow path that's made out of colorful jelly going straight to the mountains. The mountains have vanilla ice cream and they are at the distance. A beautiful fairy with a lovely purple dress with lollipops on it. Clouds are floating in the lovely blue sky like planes..   

4 comments:

  1. Awesome post Rosie! Your description makes me want to go there! It sounds delicious!

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  2. Wow what a lovely prescription Rosymary!

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  3. I loved it when you read this to me without showing me the picture! You have used some fantastic detail.

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  4. I like the pecher

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