The smell collector

The Smell Collector

WALT write entertaining poems

We will know we can do this when:

• meaning - focus on one sense
• four lines per verse
• rhyme (2nd & 4th line)
• beginning and ending

A stranger called bob

Dressed in blue and black

Put every smell into a bag

And carried them in a sack

The smell of the dirty hay

The smell of fire burning

smells are all around us

as long as the word is turning

I can smell the beautiful flowers

and the freshly mown grass

The rain on the hot concrete

And also on the glass

The smell of the dinner cooking

the bath bubbles getting ready

the wet dog running in

I try to hold her steady

The smell of the dishes  washing

the coffee on the table

the hot potatoes cooking

smells don’t have a label

A stranger called Bob

he didn’t leave the smell

he took them all away

life will never be well.

By Rosemary

The spammer

spammer

In my reading group we had to make a tool. The idea was from a book called the spammer.Here is a picture of me summarising

We had to explain how your tool works. I made something called a hammer nail. How you work it is on one side there is half a hammer and on the other side there is half a nail. Well I was going to tell you how it works here is some information about how my tool works. So if a builder wanted a hammer and a nail he could just make my tool the hammer nail and he could cut a little bit of hammer and get a nail and stick them together.

Kayaking Fun

Kayaking Fun

kayak blance need a bit more work

Paddle Hold (right angles, right way)

Overall Safety I thought I did really well for overall safety.

Speed I need to work on my speed a bit.

Enjoyment  I had a lot of fun.

I need to work on kayaking a bit more

Reflection

Something I enjoyed learning was... If you go crooked you double paddle one way and then you would go stand.

Something I found challenging was...Paddling was a bit hard.

My favourite thing about kayaking in the pool was…Being safe and having a lot of fun.

My favourite thing about kayaking in the pool was…Being safe and having a lot of fun.

Talking about PRIDE

Taking about PRIDE by Rosemary Jones on GoAnimate

In the Paddock

In The Paddock

I could see the long grass and I could hear the birds chirping. The brown horses were galloping along. I felt the silver fence between my fingers. I could smell the runny poos spreading across the long grass. I taste the bugs in my mouth. I could hear the crickets and their tiny little voices. I felt like I was in a beautiful forest because looking at the lovely green trees in the background and looking at the horses.The horses were light brown.

Mum

My Mum by Rosie from Kieren Moriarty on Vimeo.

This is my poem about my mum. I hope you like my post.

Perimeter and Area

 The perimeter of the 1st shape was 24cm. The perimeter

of the 2nd shape was 18cm. The total of the 1st shape and the 2nd shape all together is 42cm.

The length of the shape is 6cm. The width of the shape is 4cm.
Area =length x width 
6 x 4
=24cm2

T-ball

The hot hot sun was beating down on my bright blue t-shirt. I could smell sunscreen on bodies. Mrs Roil called,” batter up”. It was my turn. I grabbed the bat, I could hear the people on the other team shouting at their team mates. WHACK went the bat, over went the ball.As I ran I could feel the grass on my feet. Yes I got on first base I thought to myself. My face was as red as a berry after my run.At morning tea, the water in my drink bottle took my breath away.

The homeless dog

WALT describe using the 5 senses

• look
• hear
• taste
• smell
• feel or touch

My scene:The homeless dog

The hot hot sun was beating down on my fur. A gust of  wind came and breezed over me. It felt like all the hot hot sun had vanished.Loud noises of pots banging could be heard. I could see someone cooking and smelt something  delicious coming from the kitchen. My tummy started to rumble. My tail wagged and wagged and wagged.The chef gave me some pie, it was mouth watering.

My waka

This is my waka piece, the whole class did one. The reason I did the
Italian flags is because I have a little bit of a Italian in me. I did five koru  down the bottom  because I have got five people in my family. I did kiwis on my waka because I'm from New Zealand. The reason I used blue,red and white is because those are  the colours of the New Zealand flag.
The reason I did rainbow colours is because the rainbow colours to me, show happiness.I put Rosie on my paddle because my name is Rosie.
He Waka Eke Noa. A canoe which we are all in together.

I am a...

 This is my poem. It is all about me.I hope you like my post.