“It is a long trip to go to Mars,”my sister Caroline said.
“Well what if I want to go it is not your choice.”
‘’So are you going to say goodbye to all your friends?” said Caroline.
“No, some of my friends are going to Mars,” I said.
“Do you know what you are going to do there?” said Caroline.
“Have fun”I said
No you are going to die there.
“Well I think it is a lovely idea” said my mum thank you I said.
“My dad said I am with your mum it is a lovely idea and it is your choice.”
“Well I am with Caroline said my other sister Maddie “it is a dumb idea”
“Thank you” said Caroline.
“Come and eat dinner said mum and stop bickering.”
When I woke up the next morning I felt like I was going to be sick the reason I felt like I was going to be sick is because I was so sad and worried about going to mars then a little voice came to my mind it said
“You didn't put your certificate to go to mars so you are not going.”
“Yes” I said.
“Everyone come and said around the table I have An announcement to make… I’m not going to Mars.”
“Yes” my family said.
“Why are you not going anymore” said mum
“Well a little voice came to my mind and said you didn't put the certificate to go to Mars so I am not going.” My family thought I was crazy but they were still very happy.
i like your story rosie
ReplyDeleteTino Pai Job Rosemary,
ReplyDeleteLoved How your have talked to people in your story.
Ka Rawe Job.
Keep it up.
Great story Rosemary!!!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work!
Sincerely
Cameron
Wow it sounds like you are going to mars.
ReplyDeleteI love your writing.
Good work